▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that young people tend to enjoy their lives more than older people do. However, in my opinion, the elderly can easily find a way to enjoy their lives. This is because they do have sufficient time and money and also know how to enjoy their life through their own experience. To begin with, the elder are prone to have enough money and time than the younger do. It is no wonder that money and time are essential for people to make happiness. These provide them a wide range of options to improve the quality of their lives. In case of my mother who was a teacher in elementary school, she carrys on an affluent life now. She already has her own apartment and receives a large amount of pension funds from the government. Futhermore, after retiring her job, she started to learn what she really wanted to do, such as playing tennis and musical instrument. While she was working in school, she did not have enough time to learn for pastime. Nowadays, by learning sports activities and piano, she is able to relieve her stress and feel happier than before, and so she is more satisfied with her life. On top of that, older people know well the way she enjoy her life through her experience. As people age, they have the capacity to recognize whether she can do well or not. On the other hand, young people occasionally have difficulties in taking action because they do not have a wide range of experience, and also this limits how much they can enjoy their lives. I read an article that older people are less subject to depression than young people, and I believe this result is likely to be plausible. One of my friends had the disease of depression when he entered university. This is due to the fact that he did not know well how to adapt new environment and what he really wanted to major. After passing diverse experience, he finally realized the way to adapt university life and chose economics as his major. I think that this shows aging can be a good solution for achieving happiness in our life. To sum up, older people are more affluent and have sufficient time to do, and also their experience can be a good source for finding their happiness. In this regard, I believe that the elder are easily to become happy than the younger do. * 결론부분이 좀 약한것 같은데.. 심도있는 검토 부탁드립니다. 감사합니다.
|