▶ Your Answer :
It
has been argued among many people whether borrowing or lending money from a friend can break the good friendship. It is true
that borrowing or lending money from a friend is
much easier and faster than from financial institution such as banks. However,
I believe that money transaction between friends has various harms for the good
relationship.
First,
it is possible to being not able to repay the friend's money. If the money
cannot be paid back, all of the damages from it
should be suffered by the friend who borrowed
the money. For example, there was the case of a murder in Korea which is
was caused by a
money transaction between friends. As the debtor disappeared without repayment,
the creditor was so annoyed and finally he found out his friend
and killed him. (found out은 알아내다라는 뜻입니다. found가 더 적절해요) Before this tragic
affair, these two friends were so close, and kept a
good relationship for more than thirty years.
Second,
the problem of interest is so ambiguous. When we borrow the money from
the bank, we can get repayment not only the principal but also the interest for
that principal. However, when we borrow the money from our friend, it is
not likely for the person who lent the money to
get the proper interest. I had a related relatable
experience about one year ago. I lent a small sum of money to my friend and
several months later, he repaid the money without the interest. At that time, I
was felt a little bit unpleasant because
if I had deposited the money into the bank, I could get some profit by through the interest.
In summary, I agree with the suggestion of that
borrowing money from a friend can harm the
friendship on account of the reasons that I mentioned above; not only the
possibility of unpayment the borrower not paying
exists, but also whether the interest should be paid or not is very unclear.
Writing
0-30 Score Scale |
Fair (17-23) |
Score |
22 |
Overall
Comment: |
수고하셨습니다. 포인트를 잘
잡아주셨고, 근거도 잘 대주셨어요. 다만 단어 선택에 조금 어려움을 느끼신 것 같아요. (unpayment, found out, etc.)
문법 오류도 잘 잡아주시면 더 좋은 글을 쓰실 수 있을 겁니다. |
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