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In the reading passage, it is said that the civilization of Hohokam people suddenly was destroyed during the 15th century. However, the lecturer says that there is no proof that abrupt demolishment happened at that time.
First, the reading passage argues that Hohokam people were driven to relocate because the tremendous flood deteriorated their home in the Southern areas. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the reading’s assertion that it is not likely that the floods made the people move. According to the lecturer, Hohokam people were able to restore their habitat because the flood was one of the common disasters during that time. (단수 복수 명사에 따른 동사 변화 사용 주의해주세요) Second, the reading maintains that Hohokam society collapsed due to a serious epidemic. However, the speaker maintains that it is difficult to believe that the prevailing disease put Hohokam people to death because there were no varied people who died due to the disease. This means there is no evidence that these inhabitants passed away due to the epidemic.
Lastly, the reading contends that Hohokam civilization crumbled due to internal fights. The speaker disagrees with the above idea by claiming that there is no convincing proof. For example, the speaker mentions that there was no ruling class due to absence of tombs. The tombs might have existed and proved that there was a high class, but there is no tombs proving it in real life. The lecturer also argues that Hohokam's history is not always dependable because the people’s history is mostly consists of word of mouth.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- 문장에서 because 가 자주 사용되는데, 핵심 아이디어를 소개한 뒤 because 가 나중에 오는 것이 좋습니다. (because ~, it is important --> it is important because ~)
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