▶ Your Answer : I think this topic is very intriguing because Social networking sites affect peoples' lives in both good and bad ways with the function that reveals one's daily life in images. Even though some people hesitate to expose photos on social networking sites, I prefer to keep records or my experience by exposing photos.
Firstly, keeping records or experience with photos are precious because these are the only way to remind people's memory vividly. When people did not use social networking sites, they usually saved their hardcopy photos in some places. However, it was easy to lose whenever a person moved to another place and forgot where they put photos. If they use social networking sites for keeping records or experience with photos, they can be able to save their photos on their account, which does not take personal space and has lower chance of losing the record. For example, my friend was a football player in high school and was really fit from strict discipline. He wanted to show his picture of that time, but he could not find it anymore. If he had posted about his life as football player with picture in his social network service, he could have been able to share his memory with me instantly and be nostalgic together. (don't --> do not 처럼 풀어서 작성해주세요)
Secondly, old friends can have a chance to contact each other by looking at these records online and remind experience with photos. When people want to know how their friends live now, they can know their friend's recent events with posts in social network service. As well as knowing how their old friends live their lives, With uploaded photos that share their old memories, they can start a conversation easily, taking up old events. My middle school friends who did not contact me for years sometimes comment at my old pictures, talking about those memories. It would have been awkward to comment in my recent picture that looks really far from me in middle school. Hoever, (주제와 크게 관련없는 내용입니다.) Because those friends commented my old posts, we could continue our conversation smoothly from old memory to our recent lives. To sum up, I believe my explanations above sufficiently prove why I prefer to keep records and experiences with photos on social networking sites. In order for people to get those positive functions, posting their memories with photos online is a better decision.
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