▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that the news media is
always a credible source of information. However, in my opinion, I firmly believe that not
all the news media can be reliable. This is because many articles are biased
and there are many imprecise information on the internet. To begin with, most of the articles you can
find in the news media do not take the middle ground. Every media company has
political preference, and it means that the articles can be tilted to one side.
For example, a study was conducted by Korea
Media Research to determine how different views were written in problems about
North Korea. There were two media monitored. The first media posted negatively
about the problem and supported the ideas of the conservative party. However, The
second media wrote positive news and advocated the opinion of progressive
party. This is because each media had different political inclination. This
study demonstrates that different views can be made about the same issue. On top of that, there are lots of fake
information on the internet. Many resources you can find on the internet do not
have any state where those came from. Thus, it could be improper information
from time to time. For example, when I prepared my presentation for
my business class. I used lots of information from the internet without
filtering. I realized my mistakes after professor pointed out my wrong
references but it was too late. Eventually, I made poor marks on that class.
In a nutshell, news is not able to neutral
and information on the internet always should be checked whether it is
dependent. In this regard, I think that it the news media can be a unreliable
source.
예상 점수: 17-21 총평: 일단 두번째 바디가 첫번째에 비해서 너무 짧습니다. 글의 분량을 맞춰서 작성해주시는게 좋을 것 같아요. 내용적인면에서는 첫번째 이유가 약간 biased한것 같습니다. 중립적인 매체도 충분히 존재하기 때문이라고 생각해서 인데, 물론 다양한 매체가 있어서 biased한 매체도 있지만 너무 중립적인 매체가 존재하지 않는다고 단언하기는 어려운 것 같아요. 문법적인 오류는 많이 없었습니다. 수고 많으셨습니다. |