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Some people take it for granted that it is better to learn by themselves. However, I prefer to study with a teacher rather than study by myself. The compelling logic behind this is that teachers have lots of experiences, knowledge, and motivation. they motivate their students.
To begin with, it is better to study with teachers because they have more experiences than students. Teachers have met several students, so they know which strategies are the best for each student. For example, some people who can easily get knowledge by discussing with other people, and some people want to study alone with several materials, but it is hard for students to know which methods are proper for them. However, since teachers already met a variety of students, they can guide students to find the way of studying.
Moreover, teachers got high quality education, so it is reliable to learn from them than studying by myself. While students do not know how to get solutions when they face it, teachers can teach them directions or hints to solve the problems. From my experience, when I was in high school, I had a hard time studying to study English. I studied vocabularies and grammars but I did not know how to understand passages. I asked an English teacher to interpret it and she directly did it. Also she taught me how to understand English well, so I could practice English with a right method. This is the reason that I prefer to study with a teacher.
Last but not least, teachers can motivate students but it is hard for students to motivate by themselves. People need someone who support and motivate them when they get exhausted or want to give up. Teachers usually encourage their students, so students can get motivation to study hard. It is important for students to have those people who support them but studying by themselves could not meets this element.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is better to study with teachers than study alone. This is because teachers have many experiences, knowledge, and they can encourage students.
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