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The reading passage contends that there are a few ideas to explain how the ancient Khmer Empire disappeared suddenly. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts the argument, saying that there are no exact explanations about that.
First, the speaker argues that it is unlikely that the reason of the fall of ancient Khmer Empire is The Black Death. This is because the plague moved through ships, so it was not possible that people who lived around Angkor, where which was located in the middle of land, died due to the plague. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that the plague ruined the empire. Next, according to the lecture, water system was not the factor of Angkor’s fall. The reason is that water system was not crucial, so they might have to get other sources for using to use water. Therefore, even if the water system had some flaws, it was not as powerful as much as as it could ruin the empire. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that Angkor’s people failed water system, causing caused their fall. The final point made by the lecture is that Angkor’s economy was not the reason of the fall. Agricultural products was the prime products in the empire, it was not important for them to trade with other nations. This refutes the reading passage’s argument that economic problem was fatal to the empire.
예상 점수: 21-24 총평: 요약을 잘해주셨는데 fluency문제가 몇 군데 존재해서 그러한 부분들을 수정했습니다. 구조도 잘 잡아주셨고 문단도 잘 나누어서 서술해주셨습니다. 글을 조금 더 좋아지게 하려면 문장구조를 조금 더 다양하게 사용하고, 어휘도 조금 더 advance한 것을 사용해주시면 좋을 것 같아요. 수고 많으셨습니다.
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