▶ Your Answer : Do you agree or disagree to the following statement? Students should evaluate the performance of their teachers. (Is that an introduction?) I disagree that teachers are definitely a role model for us during the school years. Children like their teachers and try to imitate their attitudes and manners, although there is a dark side too, which means that not all students are happy with their teachers and may give them low scores. As far as I’m concerned, evaluating the teachers’ performance is really essential to make sure that they are doing great in at their job, but it is important to know who is in charge of these evaluations. I believe that students are not in the position to rate their teachers. First, students are in a critical ages and could be very greatly influenced impressed by the ideas of friends. So, they can shape their minds about a teacher based on their friends’ opinions notion. It might lead to some unfair decisions such as too here, no matter these result in a higher or lower evaluations about ofa teacher. For instance, a friend of mine had some conflict and trouble hand a little incident and fought with the teacher in his class. And soon he talked bad things about the teacher he fought with. And then the word spread and soon enough a majority of the students hated the teacher and as far as I know a lot of them gave her a really a low score on the online teacher evaluation. Taking an angry student as an example, he might think that his teacher is a terrible person and even worst he cannot deliver the subjects very well. This again shows that students cannot have enough control over their activities or thoughts. Second, students are considered as learners who depend on their teachers’ knowledge and skills in different scientific subjects. well, it It goes without saying that a young student is not qualified enough to judge her teacher’s knowledge. Almost all of the students are not wise or qualified enough to judge a fully grown adult teacher. They can think of only one specific event that happened and think that the teacher is not good at his or her job. Students are not capable to see the a bigger picture and give idea about their teachers' expertise. thus it will not be a good idea for teachers to get their skills evaluated by students. In conclusion I disagree to the statement that states that students should evaluate the performance of their teachers. Because students can shape their mind about a teacher based on their friends’ notion, and students are not qualified enough to judge her teacher’s knowledge.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Score | Fair 18-21 | - 첫 번째 예시의 표현방식이 다소 어색해보입니다.
- 첫 번째 예시는 peer group에 영향에 대해 보다 자세히 전달하여 주세요. - 두 번째 내용에서는 학생의 incapability, young age, immaturity 라는 특성을 정확히 집어주세요.
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