▶ Your Answer : Nowadays, as more people are interested in travel there is a controversial issue on whether people benefit more from traveling in their own country or from traveling to foreign countries. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that people benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries for several compelling reasons. First of all, people can save their money by traveling in their own country because they can move by spending a small amount of money. To be specific, people should spend a large amount of money on traveling to foreign countries compared to money for traveling to their own country. This is because of the expensive transportation fee of the airport. Nowadays, it takes approximately 4000 dollars for their transportation to go abroad. Whereas it takes only 50 dollars if they want to travel in their own country. Therefore, it is clear that people benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries because people can move to other places cheaply in their own country compared to move in foreign countries. On top of that, people can save their time because they do not have to spend their time to move long distances. To be more precise, people should spend their much of time for moving when they travel to foreign countries. However, people can save their time for moving if they will travel in their own country because they will move a shorter distance compared to travel to foreign countries. Let me take my friend as an example. He spent 10 hours to move to Europe, whereas he spent only 2 hours to move to Busan in his own country. Therefore, he could spend his time effectively. For instance, he could spend his time on other enjoyable things like exhibition or rest. By looking at this example it is clear that people benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries because people can save their time by moving a short distance in their own country. All in all, every and each fact demonstrates my resolute standpoint that people benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries because they can save their money and time. Thus, nothing in my mind casts doubts on my stance regarding the given statements. |