▶ Your Answer :
The reading and the lecture both talk about
teamwork. The reading states that teamwork brings
several benefits. However, the lecturer argues that there are
3 reasons why teamwork is not beneficial. The reasons given in the reading are not
convincing
One of the reasons that the reading states
is that teamwork make us more efficiently. On the contrary, the lecturer argues that
this statement is false. The reasons for this is that group work takes
a long time. So, making a one schedule is not a good. Therefore according to the lecture, efficiently
is obviously wrong.
Another reason that the author in the
reading argues is that group work allows creative ideas. In contrast, the lecturer claims that this argument
is also erroneous. Because, just one or two opinion are adapted
as a dominant. It cannot make creative atmosphere. thus the lecturer conclude that creative is
not.
The final reason that the reading goes on to
explain is that team members actively participate in group work. On the other hand, the professor in his
lecture asserts that this explanation does not make sense. This is because there
are free rider problem in a group. Some people are selfish so they do not work
as a member. . therefore, according to the lecture, actively participate in is
also wrong.
궁금한 점 : 리딩본문의 이유도 언급을 해야하나요? 저는 리딩의 각각의 이유 + 리스닝렉쳐의 반대의견 + 그 이유나 예시 이정도로만 작문하였습니다. 그런데 동등한 내용만큼 비교하는게 좋다는 첨삭을 여기서 얼핏 본것 같습니다.. 200자정도로 하는게 어느정도로 작문을 해야할지 감이 안잡힙니다. 조언 부탁드리겠습니다. 늘 항상 감사드립니다! ------------------------------------------------------------------------- reading passage : teamwork brings several benefits. first, one of the benefits that teamwork brings is that working as a team helps to carry out the work more efficiently. ~ 이하생략 Second, group work allows team members to come up with various creative ideas. ~이하생략. Another benefit of having a group of people tackles a problem is that teamwork can make team members actively participate in group work. ~ 이하생략
lecture : a group of people takes a long time to do a project. because, they have to reach a consensual agreement. each members have to adjust schedule to decide~ 생략. this is pretty time-consuming. second, one or two influential people in a group will dominate the group's dicision.~ finally, free rider problem. it more difficult for the group to produce efficient results. humans are selfish~ 생략.
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