▶ Your Answer : An intriguing topic of discussion on hand is whether the Internet has greater influence on human society than television does, or it is the opposite. It may seem true that the Internet has stronger power; however, with in-depth analysis the statement seems rather too far-fetched. Although people may hold different ideas and opinions, I personally support the idea that effects from televisions are more major than those from the internet on account of two reasons: many people do not take the information on the Internet seriously, and the television holds a wider range of users.
To begin with, information and knowledge from the internet are often filtered by people. Since anyone in the world can post information on the Internet, people don't do not find it reliable as other sources such as books or television programs. Indeed, a survey recently conducted by the National Institute of Science and Information is well align aligned with this stance. According to it, only 29 percent of the respondents answered that the Internet is a reliable source. The rest subjects gave a similar reason for their response; the origin of the information in the Internet is doubtful.
Furthermore, televisions have a lower entry barriers for wider range of people. Since watching the television does not require any special skills or knowledge, people can watch it regardless of their conditions like their age or gender. On the other hand, the Internet is relatively difficult to use because the computer is a complicated machine, and there are some mandatory basis such as memorizing web addresses needed to efficiently use the Internet. For example, my grandmother loves watching dramas and new programs from the television and my niece always watch the animation which is popular among his friends, although they cannot use the Internet well.
In a nutshell, although whether the Internet or the television has bigger influence to the human society can be open to interpretation, it seems reasonable to claim that television is a dominating source of media because of the two reasons discussed in this essay. Fair: 17~23 점수: 23 일단 전체적인 내용 면에 잇어서는 아주 잘 서술하였습니다. 각 바디의 예시들이 이유를 잘 서포트 해주고 있고요. 하지만 좀 문제가 된다라고 생각 하는 부분은 두 번째 바디의 마지막 부분입니다. 이 부분이 끝맺음에 있있어서 적절하지 않게 끝났다라는 생각이 듭니다. 좀 더 왜 티피가 더 중요한지에 대한 것이 서술되었어야 했을 거 같습니다. 이러한 부분들을 주의해주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |