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The two different schools I would like to talk about are my high school and college.
First, let me talk about the high school I attended.
There were many students in the high school, and this made it[메이딧] possible for me to meet different people and learn about different things in life. This allowed me to expand my social network and broaden my perspective. And in the college, there are a lot of professors, and talking to them inspires me to make more effort for study put more effort into my studies and become responsible for what I do. This will make me competitive in the future job market.
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