◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- helpful 발음이 부정확합니다. [f]발음을 더 강하게 해주세요.
- specific
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- when I feel difficult in dealing with any problem in work
-> when I am dealing with difficult problems at work
- he can teach how to solve the problem
-> he can teach me how to solve the problems
- he might have open mind so he would like to talk to his staffs
-> if he is open-mined, he would talk to his staff
- and listen to their concerns about their own works
-> and listen to their conerns about work
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- he might be open-minded식으로 확신 없이 말하지 마시고 helpful boss = open-minded 이렇게 생각하시고 스피킹을 해주세요. helpful bosses are open-minded and will talk to their staff ... 이런식으로 말씀해주세요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3