◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- reliability [r]발음으로 해주세요
- and how their world in _____ making has changed? 발음이 부정확해 잘 들리지 않습니다.
- example, sun roof, 발음을 정확하게 해주세요
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- many people thinks that
-> many people think that
- they look features
-> they look at the features
- so people saw their features and choose
-> so people see their features and choose ...
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 조금 더 complex한 문장들을 써주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3