◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- perseverance 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- there was no evidences
-> there was no evidence
- police and judge
-> the police and the judge
- he already had record of crime
-> he had records of crime
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 잘 되어있긴 하지만 내용이 조금 부족합니다. 디테일을 더 넣어주세요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3