◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- thing발음을 더 약하게 해주세요, [th]발음에 신경 써주세요.
- did not발음을 didn't not 이런식으로 하십니다. 마찬가지로 cannot발음도 can/not 이렇게 중간 n을 살짝 강조하세요. 조금 더 부드럽게 발음해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- first of all, I was so stressful
-> I was so stressed
- I don't wanna study so I did not want to do anything
-> I did not want to study so I did not want to do anything
- the study is too difficult for me
-> studying is too difficult for me/the subjects were too difficult for me
- I don't know what I have to do so I didn't want to do anything
-> I did not know what I had to do so I didn't want to do anything
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적으로 내용이 messy합니다. did not want to study와 did not want to do anything의 관계도 알 수 없습니다. 구조와 논리에 신경 써주세요. 전체적인 구조 for two reasons, first of all, and also, 는 좋은데 이유 설명을 따로 놓고 보면 흐름이 좋지 않습니다. I was so stressed - I did not want to study - so I did not want to do anything 그리고 too difficult for me / I don't know what I have to do / so I did not want to do anything 이렇게 전개가 되고 있는데 정확히 무엇을 이야기하고 싶으신지 파악하기도 힘들고 간단한 문장들이 서로 연결이 되지 않는 느낌입니다. 브레인스토밍을 더 열심히 해주셔서 조금 더 설득력 있는 이유들을 설명해 주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 1