◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- the first suggestion에서 first발음이 부정확합니다, 's', 't'발음이 잘 들리지 않았습니다.
- for의 [f]발음을 [p]발음으로 하십니다
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- so he need to place to stay
-> so he needs a place to stay
- to stay his friend's house
-> to stay at his friend's house
- to stay professor's house
-> to stay at his professor's house
- he can receive a lot of helps about tips for writing the papers
-> he can receive a lot of help or tips for his paper
- unconvenient for each other
-> inconvenient
- because he do not familiar with the professors
-> because he is not familiar with his professors
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 마지막 문장이 이해가지 않습니다. his professor to allow his stay, 이것인가요? 먼저 allow발음을 더 정확하게 해주세요, 그리고 왜 이 문장이 나왔는지 이해하기가 힘듭니다.
- 전체적으로 이유 두 가지를 설명해주시고 마지막 문장을 for these reasons, I think the second way would be better for him이런식으로 해주시는 것이 좋을 것 같아요.
- 문법 실수가 많습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 2