-Describe the event that has influenced your life in
a positive way.
A time that has influenced my
life in a positive way is when I took the test to enter a university. In that
test, I got a higher score than ever on the exam.
First, I realized the importance
of efforts and I began to work on everything.
Because my efforts of the past
could make the result.
Second, since that, I have not
been afraid of exams.
Because I trust my efforts for
tests will help me get higher scores.
-What do you think is the most difficult stage of
life, childhood, teens, or adulthood?
I think the adulthood is the most
difficult stage of my life.
First, adults have a lot of
things to take care of. Adults are responsible for everything they did because they
are not minors protected by laws.
Second, adults have many
difficulties about their jobs.
To be specific, not only do they
have difficulties in finding a job, but they also have difficulties in working
in the workplace.
-Describe an event or change that took place in your
country in the last 25 years.
One of the changes that took
place in my country in the last 25years is that my country has become a big
city from the small country.
First, my country became a
developed country.
Technology and science have been greatly
developed and tall buildings that weren’t exist in the past have been constructed.
Second, a lot of people have been
migrated from other countries.
Because as my country progressed,
many foreigners had a lot of interests to my country.
-Explain the advantages and disadvantages of carrying
notebook computer at school.
It has a lot of advantages and
disadvantages to carry a laptop at school.
First, one of the advantages is
that students don’t have to carry heavy books.
Students can store contents of
lectures on the laptop and use them later without books.
Second, one of the disadvantages
is that it not good for students’ memory.
Writing directly on papers can more
helpful in improving their memory than typing on the laptop.
-What are the advantages and disadvantages of online
shopping?
Online shopping has a lot of
advantages and disadvantages.
First, one of the advantages is
that online shopping is very convenient.
People can buy products while
sitting in a chair without going to stores.
Second, one of the disadvantages
is that the products of online shopping malls might not consistent with the
pictures of the online site.
Because sellers upload the pictures
of products that look better than real things on the internet.
-Do you think it’s okay for kids to have a cell
phone?
I think it’s okay for kids to
have a cell phone.
First, when kids have an
emergency, they can contact with their parents immediately.
Because children are more likely
to be at risk than adults it is important for them to have a mean of
contacting.
Second, there are many
educational applications in a cell phone.
Because usual kids have a lot of
interest in a cell phone if they use educational applications of their cell
phone, it is very educationally helpful to children.
-Do you agree or disagree with the statement that
students don’t need to memorize details from classes because you can easily
look up details and facts on the internet?
I disagree with the statement
that students don’t need to memorize details from classes because they can
easily look up details and facts on the internet.
First, if they don’t memorize
details of their lecture, their abilities to memorize might become weak. Abilities
to memorize can be improved by practicing memorize various things.
Second, memorizing details from
classes enable students to gain knowledge.
To be specific, it is important
to have a broad range of knowledge to excel in today’s highly competitive
society.
-Do you think it’s better for students to learn
diverse subjects, or to focus on one?
I think it’s better for students
to learn diverse subjects than to focus on one.
First, learning diverse subjects
enable students to gain new experiences.
Students attain broader
perspective through experiences, which is qualities of a successful person.
Second, learning diverse subjects
enable students to gain knowledge.
It’s important to have a broad
range of knowledge to excel in today’s highly competitive society.
-Do you agree or disagree with the statement that
artists and musicians are important people in this society?
I agree with the statement that
artists and musicians are important people in this society.
First, they enable people to relieve
their stress.
In order to live a happy life, it
is good for people to appreciate music and art instead of preoccupied with their
jobs.
Second, they make the world more
beautiful.
Paintings on the walls and music
flowing on the road make the world better.
-Do you agree or disagree with the idea that it’s
important for children to learn to draw or paint?
I agree with the statement that it’s
important for children to learn to draw or paint.
First, learning to draw or paint
enable children to improve their creativity.
Children can imagine a lot of
things by drawing their own pictures.
Second, they can relieve their
stress by painting something.
Children can forget about their
complicated things by being interested in using a variety of colored materials
and concentrated on it,
-Do you play sports to enjoy the game, or to
win/compete?
I play sports to enjoy the game.
First, playing sports games
provide pleasant for me on their own.
Even If my team lose, playing
sports games is enjoyable enough.
Second, playing sport games to
win can cause people involved the game to be injured.
For example, last year when I played
soccer with my friends, one person hurt another person by a desire to win.
-Do you agree or disagree with the decision to allow
students to park their cars on campus?
I disagree with the decision to
allow students to park their cars on campus.
First, usual campuses don’t have
enough parking lots that accommodate all of the students’ cars.
If so, there will be many
problems about parking
Second, professors can have
difficulties when they park their cars on campus.
It is important for professors to
keeping times of their lectures. But if students are allowed to park their cars
on campus, it will make professors take a lot of time to park.
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