◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정할 사항 없습니다.
- 전체적인 페이스와 톤이 좋습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I love films because it inspires me a lot
-> I love films because they inspire me a lot
- I'm watching film every night
-> I watch films every night
- many of artists from different fields gather and work together
-> many artists from different fields
- because I like collaboration with talented people
-> because I like collaborating with talented people
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조와 흐름이 좋고 컨텐츠도 좋습니다. 몇 가지 문법 실수들만 아쉬웠습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 4