◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- agree 'gree' 부분을 더 길게 끌어주세요.
- destroyed 'troyed' 부분을 더 정확하게 발음해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I agree with the statement the government should preserve...
-> I agree with the statement that the government should preserve..
- building new ones have been caused gentrification
-> building new ones have caused gentrification
- poor people are forced to leave their homes and residencies
-> poor people are forced to leave their homes (home = residence)
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 내용은 좋은데 두 번째 포인트 설명이 부족합니다. poor people are forced to leave their homes, this is problematic에서 끝나서 아쉬워요, 시간이 남는다면 주제와 한번 더 연결을 해주시고, 남지 않은다면 다른 불필요한 내용을 줄이셔서 설명(주제와 연결)을 위한 시간을 더 확보해주세요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3