◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- reading [r]발음이 현재 [l]발음에 더 가깝습니다.
- woman 2개의 syllable이에요, 정확하게 발음해주세요. 특히, [w]발음에 신경써주세요.
- artists "tists" 부분 연습해주세요.
- before [f]발음 정확하게 해주세요.
- often [f]발음 정확하게 해주세요, open으로 들렸습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- in the reading, the university should consider
-> in the reading, it says that the university should consider
- the university should consider displaying arts
-> the university should consider displaying artworks
- these arts
-> these artworks
- students while breaking can see the artworks on the library
-> students can see the artworks on the library wall during breaks
- it makes not bored with them
-> it makes them less bored
- and they can more often go to the library
-> and they can go to the library more often
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 매우 잘 되어있습니다. 발음, 문법 실수만 줄이시면 충분히 높은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같아요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3