◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- forces 끝 부분을 'sees'로 발음하십니다.
- robot [l]발음처럼 들리지 않도록 주의해주세요.
- invest [v]발음을 더 정확하게 해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- there is a advantages for using robots
-> there are advantages of using robots
- humans will use more time to enjoy the activities
-> humans will have more time to enjoy the activities
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조와 흐름이 좋고, 제시하신 이유들에 대한 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 4