◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- professor 발음하실 때 [p]를 [f]발음으로 하고 계십니다.
- more 발음이 mall로 들리고 있습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- when companies advertise product
-> when companies advertise products
- there were a company which used image of big bear
-> there was a company which used an image of a big bear
- so they got them
-> so they bought the cookies
- whenever people saw the big bear, they came up with the cookies
-> whenever people saw the big bear, the cookies came to mind
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적인 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 주요 포인트 언급을 잘 해주셨습니다.
- 설명을 매끄럽게 잘 해주셨습니다.
◆ Comments
- 관사 관련 문법 실수들이 있습니다. 이 부분에 조금 더 신경을 써주세요.
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