◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- weekend 발음이 부정확합니다.
- instead of outside 발음이 뭉치고 있으니 주의해주세요.
- main purpose 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- a woman has a problem that she is planning to
-> The woman has a problem which is that she is planning to
- it is supposed to be raining tomorrow
-> it is going to rain tomorrow
- first one is postpone the picnic
-> first one is postponing the picnic
- most important thing is that children have fun
-> most important thing is that children should have fun
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적인 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 제시하신 이유가 적절하고 설명이 논리적으로 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 몇 가지 발음과 문법에 신경을 더 써주세요.
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