◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- very 의 v발음을 정확히 해주세요, 현재 b 로 발음 하고있습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- she cannot move into new place
-> she cannot move into a new place
- ~so she stay in parents' home
-> so she stays in her parents' home
- the first suggestion is that staying in friends' dorm
-> the first suggestion is to stay in a friends' dorm room.
- I think the first suggestion is the better for her
-> I think the first suggestion is better for her
- this is because dorm is near from the library
-> this is because the dorms are near to the library
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 내용 요약은 잘됐으나 두번째 이유 설명 하실때 애매해서 아쉽습니다.
◆ Comments
- 문장을 말씀하실때 조금 딱딱하고 자연스럽지 못한 점이 아쉽습니다.
- 문법실수가 많아 아쉽습니다.
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