Which is the best way to study: alone. with a friend, or in a large group?
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- to studying in a large group
→ to study in a large group
- different fact
→ different facts
- the studying in a large group
→ studying in a large group
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적인 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 왜 group study를 하면 집중이 잘 되는지에 대한 설명이 더 필요해보입니다.
◆ Comments
- 조금 더 논리적인 설명이 필요해보입니다.
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