◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- by giving this advices
-> by giving this advice
- I will advice him to be wake up early
-> I will advise him to wake up early
- because reason why he's late is he's lazy but also he had less time to prepare
-> because the reason why he's late is because he's lazy and has not a lot of time to prepare
- I will advice him to make a friend who is
-> I will advise him to be friends with someone who is
- other's feeling by being other's position
-> other's feelings by beining in their position
- and he can feel sorry to us
-> and he can feel sorry about it
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 제시하신 첫번째 이유는 assumption느낌이 강합니다. 조금 더 적절한 이유를 선택해주시는 것이 좋을 것 같아요.
- 전체적으로 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 문법에 조금 더 신경 써주시면 좋겠습니다.
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