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In the given article, the author contends a jazz club in Monroe, the C Note, would make high profits because of some reasons. While it is possible that the author's argument is expedient, more evidence is needed to evaluate it.
Based on the reason that the nearest jazz club moved to another place where is 65 miles away, the author firstly argues that the C Note would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. There, however, is some doubts about another club's quality. For example, if another club moved to another place in order to upgrade their club quality, people would go to the newly updated club even though there is a little far from their village. Also, 65 miles can be just a little far to some people, therefore, to strengthen his argument, more reasonable evidence is required.
On the basis of the perception that the last Monroe's jazz festival's more than 100,000 participants, the author also contends that the C Note jazz club would profitable in Monroe. But in general, even though jazz is not popular in some cities, if celebrities come to the city for a jazz festival, people tend to participate in the festival. Also, the reasons people go to jazz festivals are very different not just for loving jazz. Some people like to go to a jazz festival because of socializing and some people prefer to go to a jazz festival because of relieving stress. Thus, the author's argument is rife with holes and more evidence is needed.
With the idea that a nationwide study announced the typical jazz fens spends a lot of money on jazz entertainment, the author finally argues the C Note jazz club in Monroe would be a profitable enterprise. However, the study's participants are too broad. That means even though some countries people like to listen to jazz and spend money on jazz entertainment, the Monroe residents may not like to do that. The author, thus, is required to suggest a more specific study in order to support his opinion.
Examining all the various angles and factors involved with three reasons the author suggested, the argument does not justify the C Note would make profits. While the proposal does highlight a possibility, more information is required to warrant any action.
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