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제시문:
Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
(일부의 사람들은 환경 보호를 정부가 해야 할 일이라고 말한다. 이와 반대로 다른 사람들은 모든 개개인이 환경 보호에 책임이 있을 수 있다고 믿는다. 두 의견에 대해 논하고 당신의 의견을 제시하라.)
답안:
People hold different views about whether the government should shoulder the responsibility of preserving the environment or each person is responsible one. From my standpoint, it will be more beneficial if both the country’s authorities and individuals share the responsibility.
(제시문 다시 요약한 서론)
On the one hand, the government may play a pivotal role in maintaining the environment safe and healthy. It is authorities that should introduce the legislation in order to mitigate environmental problems, such as air pollution and more. To illustrate, there should be some laws encouraging factories to move to the country sides rather than staying in cities. This could help urban areas to be further protected from the poisonous fumes, which are always discharged from firms. Another prominent role the government could play would be creating TV programs to educate citizens, and to persuade them to care the nature more. Being informed of the consequences of their activities, individuals may endeavor to alter their ways, to avoid harming the environment.
(정부는 환경 보호와 개선에 중심적인 역할을 하고 있다는 내용으로, 근거로 ⓐ 법 제정이 가능 ⓑ 시민을 환경 보호에 힘쓰도록 교육할 수 있음)
On the other hand, it is undeniable that each person can play an important role in protecting their own neighborhood. Cars are considered to be a major source of air pollution. Their exhaust gases contaminate the air, ranging from carbon dioxide to unburnt carbon. Therefore, by using their own vehicles only in rare cases, people would be able to protect the environment. Another opportunity available to individuals is recycling. By stopping plastic waste from entering and contaminating waterways people are able to conserve drinkable water and its inhabitants.
(개인 범주에서 자신 주변의 환경을 지키는 역할을 하는 것이 중요하다는 내용으로, 보다 환경 보호에 도움이 되는 연료를 사용하는 자동차를 고르는 것과 재활용을 습관화하는 것을 예로 들고 있음.)
In conclusion, due to the large amount of work involved, mobilizing all the possible forces is a more sensible approach. It is, therefore, likely that joint efforts of both the governments and their citizens would result in the most effective way of preserving the environment.
(결론적으로 정부, 개인의 노력이 결합했을 때 환경 보호가 더욱 효과적일 것이라는 내용)