What Does Modern Science Bring us
1)과학이 우리에게 끼치는 영향 ? 이 문제는 아직까지 논쟁이 되고 있다.
2) 많은 사람들이 과학이 많은 문제점들을 가지고 왔다고 생각한다. 예를 들면, 오염이나, 핵무기 등등.
3) 아래의 나의 생각은 ...
작문시 꼭 필요한 내용 : 현재 논쟁이 되고 있는 문제들을 간단히 설명한다. 그리고 나의 생각을 말한다. 과학이 나에게 가져온 장점을 설명하면서 과학의 발전이 나쁜점보다는 좋은점이 많다는걸 강조한다.
What Does Modern Science Bring us?
What Does Modern Science Bring us? The question “What does modern science bring us?” has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.
[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]What’s more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work. From Joozone.com.
[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.
1.좋은 표현 :Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.
예 :내가 생각하기에 옛날의 두꺼운 사전보다 현재 쓰고 있는 전자 사전이훨씬 더 편하고 시간을 단축 할 수 있다.
2.좋은 표현:Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.
예 :한사람을 알려면, 우리들은 그 사람이 어떤 친구들을 사귀며, 어떤 책을 읽는지를 보고 알 수 있다.
3.좋은 표현 :It is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.
예:한사람의 성공은 그의 겉모습에 따라 결정되는 것이 아니라 능력에 따라 결정되는 것이다.
【JOOZONE EDITOR'S KEY WORDS】
1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.
2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.
3. It is not one’s appearance but his capability that decides his final success.