There are many songs that I like.
Among them, I would like to talk about a song called 봄날 which means whose meaning is spring day in Korean (참고로 말씀하실 때에는 in 앞에서 반 템포 쉬어가시면 됩니다.).
The song is about a love story.
When it comes to when I listened to it for the first time, I came across this song when I was walking on the street 2 years ago listened to this song 2 years ago
when I was walking on the street, I came across this song.
this song’s melody and lyrics was very impressing, so impressed. I searched this song on the Internet. this song made by BTS which is the most famous boy group these days so I was surprised.
There are several reasons why I like it.
First of all, this song is my favorite song. (내가 봄날을 좋아하는 이유 중 하나는 그게 내가 제일 좋아하는 곡이기 때문이다~. 는 말이 안 되죠. 다른 이유를 찾으셔야 합니다. 차라리 '나를 BTS에 대해 알게 해주었다~라고 하는 게 낫습니다.)
Because of this song, I became into BTS.
Second, this song is a touching story.
Whenever I hear this song, I tend to reminisce my ex-boyfriend.
Last but not least, It is easy to sing along to the lyrics, so when I get stressed from my work, I sing this song.
총평: 위에서 말씀드렸듯이 첫 번째 이유의 경우 말이 안 되는 상황입니다. (좋아하기 때문에 좋아한다) 고로 이에 대한 수정만 조금 해주시면 될 것 같아요.
수고하셨습니다 :)