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Comment | Prompt: Some students would prefer to live with roommates. Others would prefer to live alone. Which option would you prefer and why? I think it is um better to live with the roommates for two reasons. First of all, you can save money, because if you share your room with your roommate, then you’d be paying half the rent that you’re supposed to pay if you live by yourself, but together you can half that, so that’s um economically more efficient. And secondly living with roommates can help you to really um get uh more comfortable with living together and um just being more considerate of others rather than just living by themselves which can um make them live more self-centeredly. |
글쓴이의 의견을 설득력 있게 전달해주신 좋은 답변 남겨주셨습니다. 실전에서는 글에서 나타나는 것처럼 um과 같은 의미 없는 단어의 빈도를 약간 줄여주시고 보다 자연스럽고 유창하게 답변해주신다면 더욱 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.