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Comment | Talk about a special day which was not that expensive or on which you didn’t have to spend a lot of money. You should say: What was the occasion? Where you went? Who did you celebrate with? Why it didn’t cost you much? In fact, there are many special days which was not that expensive, but I have to say my close coworker 성은's birthday is the one that first pops into my mind. The occasion was coworker's birthday, as I mentioned. We went to Since one of our managers pretended to have an urgent meeting, we gathered in the meeting room. As for the question who did I celebrate with, I celebrated her birthday with the other coworkers. The reason why it didn't cost me much is because we gathered everyone's overtime meal allowance to celebrate. Due to heavy workload, we used to work overtime often at that time. So we were able to spend overtime meal allowance. With gathered meal allowance, we ordered a lot of chicken and a Loppy-shaped cake which is her favorite character. We didn't spend even thousand won for celebrating thanks for the meal allowance. We really enjoyed the party, and she looked very happy. That's the reason we didn't spend anything. |
글쓴이만의 개인적인 경험을 녹여내어 질문에 답변해주신 점이 인상적입니다. 실전에서 작성해주신 것처럼 자연스럽고 유창하게 답변해주신다면 좋은 점수 받으실 수 있을 것이라고 생각됩니다. 수고하셨습니다.