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Comment | < part 2> Q. Describe your favorite place in your house where you can relax where it is what it is like what you enjoy doing there explain why you feel relaxed at this place A. Although I love all places in my house, but the place that I can relax is my room. It is a common room that has a bed, a desk and a chair to study, and closets. It has two dolls too. I sometimes just lay down on my bed and spend time watching youtube videos or searching SNS such as Instagram. I also study my major, statistics, on the desk. Last, but not least, I sleep with my favorite dolls. I love my room because it is the only place that I can be alone. As I has lived in dormitory since I was 17, I < part 3 > Why it is difficult for some people to relax? In my opinion, it is because they don’t have time to think about themselves. Thinking about oneself is very important to cure mind’s hurts. People are too busy to be alone. They have to work or study all day. It seems to me that, people need time to take a rest.
What are the benefits of doing exercise? There are lots of benefits of doing exercise. I read studies that working out can prevent depression and help to have better social relationships with others. In addition, doing exercise helps us to lose fats and make healthy body shape.
Do people in your country exercise after work? As far as I am concerned, plenty of people exercise after their work or study. This is because people started to know how exercise is important by digital devices such as TV program. And especially, some young people exercise to show their body and post pictures on SNS such as instagram.
What is the place where people spend most of their time at home? As far as I am concerned, it is their own room. People spend most of time in their own places because traditional familiy structure
Do you think there should be classes for training young people and children how to relax? From where I stand, I don’t think it is essential to teach how to relax to young people and children. The way people relax is different one by one. For example, I feel relaxed when I am alone. But my friends get energy when she is with her friends. As everyone has different ways to feel relax, we don’t need to teach it. However, it is important to teach what we should not do to take a rest such as drugs.
Which is more important, mental relaxation or physical relaxation? I |
해당 질문들에 대해 적절하면서도 논리적인 답안 작성해주신 점이 인상적입니다. 대부분 잘 작성해주셨지만 몇몇 부분들에서 시제 일치가 되지 않는 부분들이 보이고 있어 이 부분에만 신경써 주신다면 충분히 좋은 점수 받으실 수 있을 것이라고 생각됩니다. 수고하셨습니다.