Part one

- What did you study in history lessons when you were at school? 

Well, I studied war(s) like World war and Korean war and also I studied the background of the time line and so on. (더 구체적인 답변 제시-> the historical context of the war and its impact)

- Did you enjoy studying history at school? [Why/Why not?]

It's different depending on the kind of story. In case of me(For me), I enjoyed studying about war(s -> '세계에서 일어났던 전쟁들' 과 같이 구체적으로 명시 )when i was in school because it was interesting for me. 

- How often do you watch TV programmes about history now? [Why/Why not?]

Well, I watch the TV programm called "Naked history of the world" and I watch it by (an) OTT service called "Tving". So, these days, I watch it every day. Professional people like professors show up(-> 'Experts such as professors appear on the show' 가 더 자연스러운 문장입니다) and explain the story of the world like World war, person like Winston Churcil. It is really intersting. (위에서도 'it was interesting for me' 와 같이 'interesting' 이 반복되니, 다른 단어로 대체하면 좋을 것 같습니다. 또한 'I found it interesting' 과 같은 문장도 좋겠습니다) 

- What period in history would you like to learn more about? [Why?]

If I (could) learn more about history, I would like to study about (the) Chosun dynasty because there were a lot of cases like (Korean) war, (and) Japanese occupation. It was really sad but really important (sad 라는 기본적인 단어 대신에, 'it was a tragic' 과 같이 변형할 수 있겠습니다) case in the Korean history so I want to learn more about that. 

Part two

- Describe the neighbourhood you lived in when you were a child. (You should say: where in your town/city the neighbourhood was what kind of people lived there what it was like to live in this neighbourhood and explain whether you would like to live in this neighbourhood in the future.)

Well, when I was a child, I was lived in Jung moon-dong in Seogwipo and it's located in Jeju island. And at that time, my cousins lived next the door (nearby) and my friends as well. So, (we) always hung out with them after school at that time. 

So, I don't remember about that (all the detail) but It was really good in that neighbourhood (it was a good neighborhood) because when I was 17, I moved to Jeju-si but it was really sad(which made me sad). But I don't really want to live there in the future because the town is so small so It's really limited to improve myself(->town with a limited opportunities for personal growth) so I want to live in (a) big city (like..예시).

Part three

- What sort of things can neighbours do to help each other?

Well, When I meet my neighbours, I always say "Hi" for(to) them. I think it's (a) good thing for each other. And also, there (are) 8 neighbours in the apartment that (where) I lived. We clean(ed -> 앞 문장에서는 'lived'라고 하셨는데 여기서는 현재동사 'clean'이라고 하셔서 시제가 헷갈립니다. 시제 통일에 유의해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다) Aisles and stairs every months as rotation. It's also (a) good thing for each other.(위 문장과 반복되는 문장으로 'which is a good way to help each other' 과 같이 다양하게 표현해보시면 좋을 것 같습니다.)

- How well do people generally know their neighbours in your country? 

Well, generally, people doesn't(don't) know their neighbours well because they are not interesting(interested in) each other. Some people say "Hi" when they meet their neighbours but some people doesn't(don't). And if they meet each other, they just pass through them.

- How important do you think it is to have good neighbours?

These days, It's really important to have their own personal life after work, so I think it's really important to have good neighbours. Because If my neighbours make noise, I can't have a rest in my home. I'm always being annoyin(annoyed)g about that and it's really bad for me.

(-> 'being annoying' 은 자신이 남을 짜증나게 한다는 것이고, 'annoyed' 로 써주셔야 본인이 짜증나는 감정을 가지게 된다는 의미가 됩니다. 참고로 'boring' 도 마찬가지로 'I'm boring'은 내가 지루한 사람이다, 'I'm bored' 는 나는 심심하다 라는 의미가 됩니다)

- Which facilities are most important to people living in cities? 

These days, I'm really into working-out so I think (the) gym and some facilities like park is(are) really important in the city. Because it makes them healthy and also, it will be refreshment between the work and in their life. So, I think it's really important. 

- How does shopping in small local shops differ from shopping in large city centre shops?

I think people prefer to go shopping at large shopping mall because they can easily find what they want. Well, If they go (to) small local shops, it could be great but i think they generally have low quality stuffs than big city's shops. Also, there are not many stuffs. And in case of (a) large shopping mall, there are a lot of franchise(s) like Nike, Adidas. They basically have the great quality stuffs so I think that's why people prefer to shop at (a) large shopping mall. 

- Do you think that children should always go to the school nearest to where they live?  

Well, generally it would be great for their family to go to (the) school nearest to where they live but I think it's different depending on the purpose. Because in case of me(in my case), I was training my swimming skills for (a) competition every months so I have to go to (a) school that located in other(another) city and it takes 30 minutes by bus. So I think it's just different (for) each people.



점수 5.5-6.0 예상

점수는 실제 시험에서 흐름, 발음 그리고 유창성에 따라 달라지겠지만, 스크립트만 보았을 때는, 문법적으로 단수/복수 일치가 되지 않는 부분이나 시제 부분에서의 혼동이 있을 것 같습니다. 

'people' 은 복수이므로 뒤에 꼭 'doesn't' 이 아닌 'don't 이 올 수 있도록 해주시고

또한 반복적인 표현 'it's interesting' , 'it's sad' 'it's a good thing' 보다는 다양한 표현을 더 익혀주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.