PART3 [Discussion topic](Watching films/movies)
Q. What are the most popular types of films
in your country?
A1. I think people like Hollywood
blockbuster movies the (필수는 아니고, 스피킹이기 때문에 더더욱 중요하지는 않지만, 그래도 넣는 게 좋긴 합니다.) most, especially among young generations. People love
watching famous movies and talking about them. Since many blockbuster movies have
been successful, many big movie companies consider South Korea as one of the
major target countries. So, many popular movie stars visit my country to
promote their movies.
A2. I think people like action movies most
because these can give audiences thrills and suspense. Also, these can help you people escape from harsh reality while watching it.
둘 중에 고르자면 1번 답변이 훨씬 좋긴 한데, 두 답변 모두 your country 와 관련지어 조금 더 구체화해주실 필요는 있습니다.
Q. What is the difference between watching
a film in the cinema and watching a film at home?
For watching a film at the theater, we have
to pay for the tickets. Nonetheless, many people are willing to pay the price it because
they want a better quality of screen and sound system. And, watching movies in
the theater together is a good way to spend time with people you like. (세 문장 내에서 주어를 통일해주세요~) But,
some people want to watch movies at home because they want personal time. It
can be more relaxing with putting a pajama on and sitting on a couch.
However, sometimes, depending on the
company's promotional strategy, the latest movies can be hard to find watch at home straightaway.
They want to screen their movies only in the theaters.
What I hate about watching a film in the
cinema is that people who do not have manners such as kicking my seat or eating
stinky food. (이 부분은 집에서의 관람 관련 내용이 나오기 전으로 보내주세요~)
Q. Do you think cinemas will close in the
future?
A. No. I think cinemas will be still
running for more decades. I believe people will value spending time together
like watching movies no matter how advanced the technology is.
Even now, while there are many technologies
make us communicate remotely, we still like to meet each other directly.
But, we can guess many facilities of the
cinemas will be changed continually in the future just as it has changed
significantly and rapidly.
감사합니다!!
총평: 질문에 대한 답변은 잘 갖춰주셨는데, 몇몇 보완사항만 말씀드리자면 먼저 주어는 통일해주실 필요가 있습니다. 어떨 때에는 people 이 사용되었다가, 어떨 때에는 we 가, 또다른 경우에는 you 가 사용되었으므로 정돈이 덜 되어있죠. (물론 라이팅과는 달리 스피킹에서 이를 바로 하기는 상당히 어렵긴 합니다.) 그리고 순서상 조절이 필요한 부분은 제가 위에 표시해드렸으므로 그걸 따라주시면 될 것 같아요.
발음 등은 나중에 녹음본도 올려주시면 확인하고 도와드리겠습니다. 수고하셨습니다 :)