[TOPIC]
Describe an advert you once saw that was very effective. You should say:
where this advert appeared
when you saw it
what it was advertising
and say why you thought it was so effective.
[Script]
On this topic, I'm going to talk about a fashion magazine advert (어- 보다는 애- 쪽에 가깝게 발음해주세요~).
In fact, yesterday, I watched an advert on TV with my husband at home.
The advert was a fashion magazine. (조금 더 명확하게 표현해주셔야 합니다. 예를 들면 The advert was about a fashion magazine 등으로요.)
There are several reasons why I thought it was so (잘 들리지 않게 너무 흘려서 말씀하셨으므로 조금만 더 명확하게 표현해주세요.) effective.
First, It had my favorite actress appeared on it.
She is very popular in Korea so, it is difficult not to be aware of her.
and she is an idol for Korean women because she is stylish and beautiful.
I thought think her presence is enough to advertise the product.
Second, It had lots (ㅊ 소리가 나지 않게 조절해주셔야 할 것 같습니다.) of intense colors such as vivid colors and bright colors.
This These colors and graphic effects gave me an intense impression.
This is my story about an advert I once saw.
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6.0-6.5 점수를 받아야하는데 저 정도의 스크립트 수준으로 가능할까요?
총평: 일단 발음이 원어민과 같이 매끄럽게 흘러가는 건 아니지만, 그래도 할 수 있는 한도 내에서는 충분히 잘 말씀해주신 것 같습니다. 덕분에 '여기서 무슨 말을 하려고 하는 거지?' 와 같은 의문이 전혀 들지 않았어요. 이러한 명확성이 상당이 중요하죠. 하나의 자료만 가지고 판별하기에는 어렵지만, 그래도 이 글과 녹음본만 봤을 때는 딱 6.0에서 6.5를 왔다갔다하지 않을까 싶네요. 수고하셨습니다 :)