part2. Describe a toy you liked in your childhood.
OF all the toys I had had before, a doll takes my cake.
This is a doll which looks like a rabbit and it is made of piece of cloth, filled with cotton in it.
Honestly, I didn’t remember when I received this doll. However, I can find a number of photos of me with this doll lying together. I can remember that I was supposed to treat this as a younger sister. Even though I received other toys such as barbie dolls, teddy bears or crocodile doll, it was still my priority.
There are several reasons why I love this doll
Firstly, I still have this doll in a box in my room.
Secondly, this is a symbol of my mother’s love. In the past, my
father had a hard time earning was hard time to earn money for my
family. Because of that she couldn’t afford to purchase even a toy for me. SO,
she made it herself.
Lastly, I feel like it is still my younger sister.
Therefore, I will never throw it away until I die.
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part3.
1. do you think parernt should buy more toys for their kids or spend more time with them?
Well, in my opinion, parents should try to keep balance between spending their time with their children and buying toys.
We cannot deny that toys not only have educational functions but also can develop children’s skills such as spatial awareness and a sense of color and so on.
However, some parents, especially dual income families, use buying
toys as means of keeping their children quiet and out of their ways. If they
use this method too often, their children would become children kids who have a short
attention span.
Therefore, I believe that parents should purchase and give toys to their children in a reasonable timing.
2. What's the difference between the toys kids play now and those they played in the past?
The most noticeable differences between the past and now are whether toys can move automatically or not.
In the past, almost all most toys were made of only wood and plastics.
Because of that, children should had to move it manually and put various imaginations
to them. In addition, if they wanted to be more relish more, they have to make more friends. (여기 친구는 인형 친구를 의미하는 건가요? 그럴 경우 이걸 확실히 표현해주셔야합니다.)
However these days, many toys can are run automatically by electricity electronics.
Even computer games show various and plenty of stories themselves. What
children need is just watching and following.
I think, in light of growing of one’s life, old toys have more
advantages such as building creativity and imagination. (질문에서 요구된 바가 없는 내용입니다.)
총평: 자잘한 오류가 있긴 했지만 스피킹은 라이팅과는 달리 자연스러운 전달력이 가장 중요하므로, 문법 오류에 두려워하지 마시고 자연스럽게 대화하는 연습을 위주로 해주세요~파트 2의 경우 세부 조건들을 적어주시지 않아서 내용 관련해서는 못 봐드렸습니다. 수고하셨습니다 :)