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The bar
graph shows the percentage of the people in the UK who consume more than 5 portions
of fruits and vegetables per day over a period of 8 years. of period
Over
all, it is clear that there has been increase in fruit consumption in all three
categories of the UK population initially. (이렇게 적을 경우 과일 '섭취량' 이 증가했다는 의미가 되어버립니다. 그러나 여기서 표현해야 하는 것은 '5개 이상의 과일/채소를 섭취한 남/녀/어린이의 비율이 증가했다.' 이죠.) Throughout the period, it is shown
that a largest proportion of men has fruit consumption of more than 5 portions
per day, followed by women then children (여성의 수치가 가장 높습니다.). The proportion of male and female
adult population has reached its peak in 2006 with the percentage of
approximately 34% and 27% respectively. On the other hand Meanwhile, the proportion of
children with more fruit consumption continued to rise, reaching its climax
with percentage of at roughly 25%. (언제 그랬는지에 대해 적어주셔야 합니다.)
Looking
at the bar graph more closely, percentage of men shows a fairly constant rise of
about 3 percentage points each year until it reaches its highest point in 2006,
and from then, there was a constant decline of similar percentage points. On the
other hand, the proportion of women remained fairly constant from the year 2001 to 2003
with around 17%, however; it showed great rise in proportion until 2006,
reaching its peak at around 27%. The percentage remained steady through the year 2007,
then declined by about 2 percentage points in 2008. Lastly, the proportion of
children remained constant with women population through 2001 to 2003, then
showed a constantly increasing pattern until 2007, with percentage of roughly
25%, then reduced by approximately 2 percentage points in 2008. |