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people are going to university. Some people study for getting a job, but others
study fundamental field such as biology and math at university (쉼표 전후로 본질이 다릅니다. 전자 쪽은 공부하는 이유가 나와있지만, 후자는 공부하는 과목이 나와있죠. 둘 중 하나로 통일해주세요~). I firmly
believe universities should provide skills related to basic science. This essay
will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
Generally speaking,
There there are two reasons why people believe that universities should teach students
to adapt better at workplaces. The primary reason for this is that people go to
university to get a job. Many college graduates people think they can earn more money than people who graduated from high school working as a person who graduated from high school. Furthermore, people can
have more job opportunities when they have bachelor’s degree. It is true that
professors can offer job opportunities, and sometimes they can recommend CEOs
to hire their students. (앞과 똑같은 맥락에서의 근거를 표현말 살짝 바꿔서 돌려말하고 있기 때문에 적절하지 않습니다.)
However, it must
be said that there are several arguments to the contrary. Perhaps, the
strongest argument is that universities should focus on not skills for work but
skills for basic science. If people only concentrate on getting a job, the
field of science and economics can not be developed. Secondly, university is an educational
institutes which give people a knowledge for its own sake. If people want to
learn about job skills and job experience, they can go to vocational schools.
In conclusion what people learn at university
is a topic (핵심은 이게 아니라 대학의 기능입니다. 대학의 기능과, 학생들이 대학에서 배우는 과목은 얼핏 보면 차이가 없어보이지만 본질적으로 전혀 다른 사항이죠.). which will continue to demand our attention to the foreseeable future.
I believe that universities should focus on fundamental subjects to develop the
world. If people ignore this phenomenon, the future of our society will be in
banger.
target score: 6.5 - 7
A: 냉정하게 말씀드리자면 6.5점 이상을 위해서라면 TR, CC, LR, GRA 네 영역에서 전부 보완이 필요합니다. 자세한 사항은 총평에서 설명드리겠고, 일단 아직 시험을 치르기 전까지 시간 여유가 있으시다면 저와 함께 큰 그림을 그리면서 천천히 접근해보아요 :)
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