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With
developed technology, young generations became more wealthier, safer and to have
good balanced bodies than the past in some countries while they were are not
satisfied with their life. Meanwhile, better pills, lack of pubs and working
overtime can be a cause be caused for this phenomenon. For these reasons, I would argue that encouraging
exercise, extending closing time of pubs and making the day of culture to would be good solutions to solve
these problems.
It
is undeniable that young people have a wealth, safe and health in comparison
with the past in some nations while they were are not happy. There are three
reasons why. Firstly, young people only tend to rely on some pills like a large
number of vitamins without working out which can attract dopamine that are able
to be pleasurable for people. Secondly, there are some restrictions by
enhancing security. For example, in the United Kingdom, almost every pub closes
before 12 A.M. Therefore, people cannot enjoy talking with their friends in the
pub. Finally, young workers have to work overtime while they can earn much
money and it is linked to shortage of spending time with their families.
On
the one hand, there are several solutions to deal with the reasons above. First
of all, the government should raise the prices of pills and encourage young
people to do exercise for their health and happiness by making a campaign and athletics
competition of their region. Secondly, the government have to allow a great
deal of pubs to extend their closing time and make a rule which has to impose
heavy fines to criminal if someone commits a crime. Finally, employer should
not do a give pressure of working overtime to young staffs and create the day of
culture or family once a month.
In
conclusion, there are reasons why young people are richer, safer and healthier
while they are not happy were not interesting. However, the The governments should perceive causes
of this phenomenon and try to deal with these problems as I mentioned above. (이렇게 적는 게 아니라 앞서 언급된 원인 해결책을 다시 한번 짧게 요약해주세요.)
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