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In modern life, it is true that a number of individuals work as a frelancer rather than a member of a company or institution. There are several reasons why this trend is common these days, while and some drawbacks of being working freely exist.
First of all, two main reasons (새로운 문단이 시작되었으므로, 무엇에 대한 이유인지를 다시 한번 상기시켜주세요.) can be mentioned. The development of technology is the most important cause. As it became common to use the high-quality of technology, working out of a organisation is possible now. For example, the Internet and equipments such as a laptop can be used everywhere. There is no longer a reason why people have to work in limited places for a company. Another reason is that many people want to have flexible time. Especially, young generations prefer to spend more time outside of their work while enjoying leisure time, compared to the old generation who only work hard, thus, young people tend to work only when they want or need. For instance, one of my friends traveled abroad for a year, and when she spent all money she had, she worked as a freelance illustrator in some countries.
However, even though a lot of people tend to be self-employed, there are also some disadvantages of this trend. Firstly, people's social abilities or skills may be decreased a social ability can worsen. People who are self-employed usually spend most of their time alone, so they less communicate less with other colleagues. This situation leads to the lack of the social ability. In workplace, not only we do our jobs, but also socialise with coworkers. (이 부분은 조금 더 앞으로 보내주세요. 즉, 먼저 회사에서 일할 때는 일 자체뿐만 아니라 동료와의 소통도 할 수 있기에 사회적 능력을 기를 수 있지만, 혼자 일할 경우~~~의 구조로 작성하는 것입니다.) Furthermore, responsibility cannot be felt as there is no one who manage tasks and deadlines. The freelances should organasie organise everything by themselves such as work schedules or conferences, and it is too easy to postpone these work because nobody forces them to work harder.
In conclusion, as technology has been developed, and many people seek some values apart from work, it has become popular to be self-employed, but the drawbacks of this trend like the loss of the social ability and responsibility should be recognised. (인식되어야한다~보다는 이러한 단점들이 있다라고 적어주시면 됩니다.) |