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A number of students say that they go through a difficulty
when they are taught at higher educational institutions such as university or
college rather than in middle or high school. I will give the reasons of this
phenomenon and also suggest two solutions.
Many students may face some hardships when they enter the
university because they are expected to be under the economic burden of tuition
fee and writing a report. Since the tuition fee of university is much more
expensive than middle and high school in general, many students tend to would work as a
part time employee. Thus, they find it hard to could not focus on only their academic tasks. In
addition, it is difficult for university students to be educated because they
are not used to writing a paper. While their academic performance is usually
evaluated by the quality of their reports or paper, there are a few chances for
middle or high school students to learn how to organize the structure of an
academic paper.
I believe that funding opportunities and special writing
courses would deal with the issues. The various kinds of scholarships and
studentships provided by universities or governments could play a significant
role in increasing the amount of time to concentrate on the academic tasks for
students. In addition, the introduction of a writing education program for freshmen freshman would be helpful for students. These could be useful for them to get
used to writing papers, helping them to adapt to higher level education courses.
In conclusion, I think that it is more difficult for the majority
of people to be taught at university or college than in school because of the
high price of tuitions and the lack of writing skills. However, I maintain that
providing students with money and writing classes may would help (기존 표현은 '음...그럴 수 있을 것 같긴 한데, 나도 잘 모르겠어.' 현재 표현은 '무조건 그럴 거야' 인데, 둘 중 뭐가 더 내 주장을 효과적으로 전달할 수 있는지는 뻔하죠.) cope with these pressing
problems. |