Your Answer ▼ It is a common belief that the females should focus more on childcare than their work. However I firmly believe that the men and women should raise their children together because, raising (바로 앞에 같은 단어가 있으니까 가급적이면 바꿔주세요~) their children is not a duty for only women.
To begin with, not only men, but also women spend lots of time in their workplaces because, our society was changed and they account for significant positions in their jobs. For example, the CEO of Shilla Hotel that is the most luxury hotel in Korea is female. She works very hard and the magazine nominated her as one of the 100 most influential people in the world. She and her husband are known that they spend lots of time with their children and do not lean to on side to childcare. If she focused more on childcare, she could not have been an influential person can not be a influential people. (예시에 대한 의존도가 너무 과하므로 조금만 더 줄여주시고, 일반 근거를 늘리는데에 집중해주세요~)
On top of that, both males and females have a duty to that raise their children because, in a society of gender equality society, people should not divide men's do and women's do. For instance, if women focus more on childcare and men focus more on work, their children think working is men's duty and childcare is women's duty (~라는 편견을 가지게 될 것이다. 라고 적어주시는 게 좋습니다.). It makes gap between men and women. In gender equality society, their children would become noncompliant noncompliance to society.
To sum up, women also play an important role in their job and do not have a duty that focus more on childcare. As I mentioned before, in gender equality society, it makes controversial issue. Both men and women should focus on their work and also provide positive effects to children. For these reasons, I disagree with this statement.
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