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The chart represents the how the rate of crime in three areas in Newport city centre changed between 2003 and 2012. Overall, while the rate of crime in burglary showed a significant downward trend from 2003 to 2012, those in robbery did not show a dynamic change throughout the period. In addition, the figure for car theft fluctuated during the period and overtook that for burglary in 2006. (1. 이런 건 세부적인 분석을 할 때 적어주시면 되며, 2. overtook 이라기보다는 따라잡혔다라고 적는 게 더 정확합니다.) In 2003, the rate number (표에서 rate 가 사용이 가능한 이유는, 03년부터 12년까지 전체 수치를 묶어서 이를 바탕으로 비율을 표현하고 있기 때문입니다. 그러나, 지금처럼 하나의 수치만 제시할 때는 rate 라고 할 수는 없어요. 다른데에도 다 수정해주세요~) of crime that took place in burglary was the highest, amounting to just under 3,500 (숫자 표현과 관련해서 쉼표를 넣는 것도 엄연히 문법의 일종이므로 반영해주세요!), but the figures for car therf and robbery were only nearly 2700 and 700. Between 2003 and 2007, the rate in the burglary decreased sharply to about 1000 by 2500, while the figure for car theft declined slightly to just over 2000 and overtook (여기도 마찬가지로, 자동차 쪽이 자기가 잘 해서 따라잡았다기보다는, 가만히 있는데 burglary 가 감소해서 어라? 하고 역전한 거라 overtook 는 조금 어색합니다. 물론 역전 자체를 다뤄주신 건 매우 좋았어요.) the former. Between 2007 and 2012, the former went down to about 1000 and remained just under the 1500, but the latter went up slightly to roughly 2600. Meanwhile, the figure for robbery was not more 100 and less than 500 from 2003 to 2012. |