Your Answer ▼ In some nations, the issues regarding the phenomenon that an increasing number of people in their 30s are stick to their parents house after they got their degree or jobs is an issue. However, compared Compared to the limited advantages for the young generations, the burdens imposed to parents and possible side effects related to the moral are overwhelming the good points. Firstly, 30s can have advantages regarding the housing fees. Nowadays, real estate prices are too high for the young generations staring their own journey. Thus, rather than struggling to pay off monthly rents, staying with their parents in a good home can be a wiser choice. By saving money through this way, some 30s might can be independent in the near future. However, the advantages that young generation can be converted into the disadvantages for old generation. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) Parents would have to should take care of their sons and daughters even in their old ages. For example, if their sons and daughters are still lingering on their home after their retirement, the financial burden will be enormous for the parents without regular salary. Adding to that, if young generations are get used to live with the help of their parents, they cannot grown up to be an independent adult. (윗 문단에서는 independent 가 될 수 있다, 여기서는 independent 가 될 수 없다~라고 적어주셨는데 서로 충돌하므로 수정해주세요! 윗 문단의 것을 지우는 걸 추천드립니다.) To become an responsible adult, one should secure one’s moral that can cope with struggles coming and strengthen the valor to win the challenges in their lives. (너무 일반적으로, 뜬구름잡는 식으로 작성되었습니다. '주거' 와 관련해서 조금 더 구체화해주세요.) To conclude, the decisions made by 30s in some countries can be a reasonable resonable choice in the short-term for financial way. However, the payoffs can drag their parents peaceful life to down (여기도 댓글 주세요!) not to mention the possibility of becoming a true adult for themselves.
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