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It is a common belief that purchasing products cultivated in domestic (domestic 은 형용사가 아닌 명사입니다.) is better than consuming imported products. However, there is a persuasive argument that buying international agricultural products is has more positive effects because they are cheaper and more diverse than domestic ones.
On the one hand, purchasing products domestically from domestic is one of ways to protect farmers. To be more specific, most people tend to consume food items from abroad because it is cheaper than the others other ways. However, people should intentionally purchase domestic products to be able to make farmers remain stable their profit by continually doing their work. Since a couple of years, for example, a lot of international products, which are cheaper than domestic ones, have been imported and many consumers are willing to buy it. This phenomenon mentions that the farmers could not cultivate foods any more unless the consumers purchase products which are cultivated by domestic farmers. (지금 지워진 부분과 같이 작성하면, 그저 위에서 했던 말을 약간 바꿔서 반복하는 것에 지나지 않습니다. 이를 대신해서, 저 파란색으로 표시해드린 부분을 보다 확장해주시면 좋을 것 같아요. 예를 들면, 저 문장만 읽고서는 '왜 우리가 domestic 쪽을 신경써주셔야 되냐?' 라는 의문이나 비판점만이 남게 됩니다. 그러므로, 파란색 부분이 이뤄지지 않을 경우, 국내 농업에 타격을 준다, 등 보다 상세한 설명을 통해 저 주장을 정당화해주세요!)
Nevertheless, it is more important better to consume international agricultural products as they are much cheaper than the other ones from domestic as well as people can have a number of options to choose what they buy products. This There is a good example that people did not even know about some kinds of fruits such as cherry and grapefruit in the past. However, by importing many types of foods nowadays, people can purchase foods, which they want, wherever at any time with at a relatively cheap not expensive price.
To sum up, while consumers should more purchase products which are cultivated by domestic farmers to protect farmers' workplace, it is undeniable that agricultural items which are imported from overseas are much more beneficial to customers in terms of cheaper price and the number of options to choose. |