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It is a common belief that students should
not be forced to study art and music at school. However, I firmly believe that
art and music have to be learned in the class for the below reasons below.
To begin with, art and music class can
enhance creativity creativities while learning them. Those subjects enable students to
broaden their view so that they can study other academic subjects with a different approach and understand the contents more deeply by applying
diversity to the subjects. While they are going through this process, they can
be more creative. For instance, music is comprised of beautiful harmonies and
those are made by highly mathematical calculation. Therefore, if we take music
class, we are able to figure out how math can be used as a tool for creating
beauty. And (문장을 and but so 로 시작하는 것을 피해주세요~) it might allow us to have a different and creative view toward that
subject.
On top of that, those two classes (문단에 처음 등장하는 대상을 대명사로 작성해서는 안 됩니다.) play a very
important role to reduce stress. It is not deniable that lots of students are
stressed out by studying many different subjects at school today because there
is no student who shows high performance in every subject. In this
circumstance, learning art and music can be one of the effective way to relieve
their stress. In this regard, those two subjects help students more concentrate
on their study with a stable condition of their mind. Studies have shown that good
music have a positive impact on human’s mind and improve concentration
abilities. (본론 첫 번째 문단처럼 비슷하게, 어떤 식으로 긍정적인 영향을 주는지 더 구체적으로 적어주세요~) That is why we listen to the music during meditation.
To sum up, taking art and music classes makes (taking 과 호응됩니다.) student a better person by maximizing creativities creativity and minimizing stress. For
these reasons, art and music should be compulsory subjects. |