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With the development of society, people’s way of life and customs have
been (been 도 틀린 건 아니지만 지웠습니다.) changed, so some people think traditional cultures are not related to
modern life and do not need to be protected. Personally, I do not agree with this
perspective.
The most significant aspect that people should consider is that
traditional customs have become already become an important asset on tourism. It
cannot be denied that tourism that does not need a great deal of investment is
one of the most valuable industries all over the world as the source of income
for the public, and people tend to travel exotic places that have been keeping the
unique way of life. That is because individuals like to experience different
customs and manners by themselves, not just watching through materials like TV
programs or movies. This is the reason why people should keep their local
habits more importantly to improve governmental revenue.
Another salient part is that it is not easy to change people’s
traditional behaviors. With the advent of globalization, the masses are likely
to immigrate to another country, however, many of them still prefer keeping their
original costumes and language because they are already accustomed to those
traditional customs. Moreover, when people go anywhere outside of their country,
many of them always bring their local food to maintain their eating habits,
even though they can enjoy new trendy food. Therefore, traditional ways of life
rather are clung to the public (참고로 public 은 의미에 따라 단수 복수가 구분되는데, 저는 둘 중 정확히 어떤 걸 의도하신지 몰라서 그냥 두었는데, 나중에 여건이 되시면 따로 정리해주세요~) who has been living in this modern society.
In conclusion, I think that traditional ways of life and customs have
become more important to earn a huge amount of revenue and people still have
kept their own habits. (그래서 이걸 보존해야되는지 마는지를 작성하는 것이 핵심입니다.) |