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The problem of over population has emerged
as one of the most Living in crowded cities has brought significant problems facing humans in the twenty-first
century. This essay will discuss the problems associated with our society and
offer some measures to tackle this issue.
There are a variety of issues which result
from overcrowded cities. The primary problem is that the cost of living is
higher than in rural areas and housing is usually much more expensive. It can
be cause a gap between the rich and poor. In addition, a number of citizens are
highly exposed to high (high 가 연속해서 두 번 쓰였으므로 가급적이면 하나는 바꿔주시는 게 좋습니다.) level of pollution caused by heavy traffic. In long run,
the air quality is getting worse. It means that citizens may suffer from
respiratory diseases, especially lung cancer that will shorten people’s life
expectancy.
Despite of these challenges, there are a
number of ways to solve this In order to solve these issues, governments should actively encourage inhabitants
of a crowded city to move to suburbs. Firstly, governments could support people
who leave the city with financial support such as reduction of taxes or subsidy.
In terms of domestic finance, It it can be a good option to moving. Another tactic
that government should invest more transportation system and facilities from to
suburbs to. If the transportation system will be better, they would not worry
about living far away from the city. (이 문단은 다시 작성해주셔야 하는데, 여기에 관해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
In conclusion, it is true that crowded
cities bring serious problems such as our health and financial problem. Thus, I believe that governments should encourage people to move to smaller areas ~ 등 However I
believe that it can be resolved when governments do financial support and
invest in suburb areas.
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